/anthro/ - Anthropomorphic

>>58314
its fine you can just end the fic here we all get the idea already anyway (:

bumo

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This is shit. Touch grass nyagga

>>58363
You love it doe…

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>>58441
That guys a shartyfag btw. Still posts on furry /qa/ generals.

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>>58499
>>58441
youre not being very convincing pal

>i just brapped all over my chair

>>58511
bro thinks he's him 💀

>>58521
i am but a voice in the choir

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>>58524
in b4 "we are all Purrgem"

>>>58312
>stop making me feel bad for procrastinating >:(

Its LITERALLY FIRE

bumo.

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>>58563
SQQN... tomorrow maybe

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>>53417
>Note: I’m experimenting with a different format for this entry. Let me know what you guys think. Also, sorry for the two-week wait… I got distracted.

The crisp autumn air greeted the pair as they walked down the forest trail next to Robin’s neighborhood. They stayed silent, the only sound being the crunching of the fallen leaves from their footsteps. The forest’s trees were now in their dull, rusted fall colors. Chud glanced at Robin. She was staring deep into the forest, as if looking for someone, or something.
Why does she look so disinterested? This walk was her idea… 
Chud stuffed his palms in his pockets. 
Is she that embarrassed to be seen around me in public…? I guess she’s trying to make this look like a regular nature walk, but there’s literally nobody else but us on this damn trail! God, why are women so fluffing difficult to understand? 
He was so deep in black-pilled thoughts that he failed to notice a loose tree branch in his path.
“Wuh—”
Chud was about to fall face-first into the dirt when Robin suddenly grabbed and pulled his arm to rebalance him.
“GEEEKKK!!! Do your glasses need cleaning, Chud?”
He was red-faced as he looked at Robin, clearly amused at his clumsiness. Her paw was still firmly grasped on his arm.
If only she moved it down a little bit more…
To Chud’s dismay, she let go as the two continued their walk.

I’m such a fluffing dweeb…
Chud tried to keep his face neutral as he berated himself.
What if I fell? My glasses would’ve broken, and I would’ve looked like such a fluffing loser… hell, I already am one!
Chud snuck another glance at Robin.
God, she’s so fluffing cute! Sure, her sweater hides her assets, but that little tuff of fur right where her collar is…
He smiled as he continued to fawn over her.
And her freaking cute face! Unlike other foxes (Latinx ones…), her snout doesn’t extend out like some greedy rootless international banker!
He felt his heart flutter a bit.
That choker necklace, I know that only whores and sluts wear that shit, but it’s different when she does it, because… it just… is… OKAY???

Without warning, Robin stopped and snapped her head at him like an owl. Chud froze.
“You were staring at me again… weren’t you?” She frowned at him as her ears twitched. He put his hands up in protest.
“N—no…”
Robin placed her paws on her hips.
“Hmmmpt… you looked a bit too happy back there…”
Chud stammered as he tried to defend himself.
“I–I wasn’t thinking anything weird! I was just appreciating the forest, like you!”
“Sure… you make it really obvious you know… you’re gonna have to learn to not do that every time we—”
Robin looked shocked, as if she had said something she shouldn’t have.
Every time we…?
“Um… GEEEKKK!!! We’re almost there, let’s keep walking!”
Chud didn’t respond. He knew what she said. So… is this really happening? This feels too good to be true!
They continued their way down the snaking path until the gazebo appeared.

As they approached, Chud noticed something moving deep in the woods from the corner of his eye. He turned his head and saw nothing. I’m just imagining things… maybe because of how fluffing nervous I am right now…
His heart pounded as they stepped into the gazebo and sat down at the table. Chud could tell Robin was trying to keep it cool, but she was fidgeting with her paws again. They sat in silence for a minute before Robin spoke.
“So… how do I even start this…?” She avoided Chud’s gaze, eyes focused on her paws.
“Well… uh…”
“...?”
“Chud…”
“Yes…?”
She looked at Chud straight in the eyes before closing them and taking a deep breath. He clenched his teeth in anticipation.
“You– You-you’re not ready for me, yet…”

“Eh… what?”
Not ready? The fluff does that mean? These fluffing stupid, manipulative, vixen foids and their stupid word games—
Chud groaned as he clenched his fists. “Really, Robin? What a nice fluffing reward! You know, you could’ve just told me that before we spent 30 minutes walking—”
Robin flashed her teeth in anger. “Whoa, hey! Let me finish before you throw a tantrum! Geeze… you’re making me regret this…”
“Then why—”
“Let. Me. Speak…”
Chud let his guard down a bit, but he was still pissed, though. She put her paw on her forehead, annoyed by Chud’s outburst.
“Did you listen to what I said? You’re not ready for me yet…”
Oh, of course… do I have to pay you or something first, you stupid whore?
Chud wanted to say that to her face, but she spoke first.
“Look, I’m gonna be 100% honest with you… In any other universe, I would never even consider… I won’t say it because I already know you’re gonna get mad, but I’m sure you get the picture…”
Chud shook his head and scoffed. “What’s your point?”
“My point is… that I… FLUFF!!!” She slammed her fists on the table.
“You can’t even say it… Am I that much of a repulsive incel to you…?” He tried his very hardest to fight back tears.
“Oh, stop being so dramatic, Chud…” She rolled her eyes.
“You’re the one slamming your fists because you can’t even fathom saying—”
“Okay! Fine!” She closed her eyes and took another deep breath.
“I… maybe… kinda… sorta… enjoyed the time we had today… and back on the roof… and…”
“And…?”
“Maybe… if you became a better person… I’m not saying you’re a bad guy or anything… it’s just… you know…”
He slouched a bit. Where is she going with this? Just spit it out, pooch!
“…I think you have… potential… and I’m willing to help you…”
Chud was perplexed. So, she knows that I’m a creepy incel, but she apparently likes being around me? And she thinks I have potential? Potential for what?
“So… what I’m trying to say is that I think I can… fix you…”

“I–I don’t need fixing!”
“GEEEKKK!!! C’mon, Chud, do you remember our conversation on Haloweeen? You couldn’t even give me a good reason for being racist! I know you don’t want to go down that path…”
AHA!!! SO, THIS WAS ALL A PSYOP TO DERADICALIZE ME OR SOME SHIT! I BET HER RAT MOSSAD HANDLER IS RUBBING HIS HANDS IN CELEBRATION RIGHT NOW!
He thought back to that night with her on the roof, the sensation of him touching her— Oh fluff it! Maybe she’s right.. and besides, how could I turn down a chance to be with her?
“…Okay…”
She broke out a small smile as her tail wagged.
“Okay then!” She stood up and clasped her paws together.
“First thing on the list is for you to actually look presentable for once…”
Chud frowned. “Presentable? What’s wrong with what I’m wearing?”
“A lot… and it's more than just your clothes… like let’s not even bring up your hair…”
“I barely have any! You sound like my mom now…”
“So? You could still make it look less… derpy… GEEEKKK!!!”
She put her paw on her chin and paced around the gazebo before stopping.
“How about we go shopping at the mall tomorrow? I could pick out something cute for you, if you don’t mind paying, of course…”
Great! This pooch is gonna destroy my allowance! Oh well, it’s not a terrible first date…
“And for the record, this isn’t a date or anything… okay, Chud? Just consider it a friend helping another friend…”
…sure… whatever foid…
They were about to head home when a familiar cry rang out next to them.

“IIIIMMMMM HEEERRREE TOOO!!!”
Averi popped up behind a bush only a few meters from the gazebo. Chud was so startled he almost fell off the table bench.
WHAT THE FLUFFKKK??? WAS SHE STALKING US THIS ENTIRE TIME??? FLUFFING PSYCHO LATINX POOCH!
Robin froze in place.
“Averi…? Uh… why the fu—”
“Oh Robbie~! Chuddie~! I heard EVERYTHING!!!” She gekkered as she took a bite from a crispy chicken sandwich she was holding.
“Aaand… I think it’s only fair that I should help too!”
“Actually, I don’t think we need help from some obsessed beaner stalk—”
“Ahem.”
Robin glared at Chud. What? Why are you mad at me??? She’s the one stalking us, but nooo… I’m the one that did something wrong… fluffing foids I swear…
“See? This is what I mean? I can’t openly be with someone who drops every slur they know at a dime…”
“Sorry, but she deserves to be called that!”
Averi gasped at Chud’s outburst.
“Chuddie~! Hmmmpt! Don’t say that… I wasn’t stalking y’all… I just happened to be walking by…”
Robin shook her head at Averi.
“Averi, you don’t even live in this neighborhood…”
Averi’s mouth was stuck open; she didn’t know how to respond.
“Ah~! Well… uh… I’m a fox!!! I don’t have to explain myself… okay~? GEEEKKK!!!”
Averi finished her sandwich as she walked towards them.
“Well~… I think I could provide some expertise in dressing up Chuddie~…"
Robin raised her eyebrow.
“Averi, I think that kinda defeats the point…”
“Eh~?”
“Look… this is more of a private thing between us… You know? We can all hang out next weekend… I promise!
Averi didn’t respond at first. Chud swore he saw her face briefly flash with hate before returning to her signature grin.
“So, you guys are going on a date…”
“No! It’s not like–”
“Okey dokey~! I see how it is~! Bye Chuddie~!”
With that, she trotted off back into the forest. They watched as her bushy brown tail disappeared into the trees.

>>58833
new gem!

>>58833
more gems!

>>58833
Write more my little write slave.

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>>43720 (OP) 
With some rare free time today, I will finally read this in full and provide feedback.

>>58833

Unironically kino

>>58833
2nd for kino

>>>58563
>SQQN... tomorrow maybe
KINQ PQTRIQT

>>58863
So way I see it we got Angel Robin on one shoulder trying make make chud not a chud and Demon Averi trying to make him lean in to scare off Robin?

>>58917
Oh shit this is gonna get interesting

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About a 4 hour read with long breaks. I'm not much of a reader. These are more just my thoughts, so treat this feedback with a bit of skepticism.
The story:
The level of detail is within comfort. I can imagine the scenes well-enough without being bogged down by excessive detailing.
However, a recurring issue is following dialogue when more than 2 characters are present. This is more a limitation of writing rather than something you can fix, so best to work within limits by making most interactions 1-on-1 as much as possible. This develops both characters more than if you try to rotate between having 5 characters talk within a chapter.

>>43726, Dreams are great for exploring a character's beliefs and desires without necessarily being bound to the rules of realism. Perhaps more of these could appear in the story.

>>45147, in the previous chapter, Chud fails to load a folder of secrets on Averi's drawing tablet, apparently containing artwork that Averi says would have made Chud stop talking to her. What could it be that Chud would find repulsive? This question doesn't need a direct answer, but rather could be something that reappears in the future (if you wish) since this secrets folder has not been mentioned again.

>>47099, Averi's detection of Chud via scent makes me wonder what more anthro-specific abilities (or weaknesses) they have. The idea is to further focus on them being anthros and not just reskinned humans, which this story does a good job of already.

>>48197, Skipping the descriptions of the abandoned house exploration was for the best here. It is better to write a scene you enjoy reading, than to force one that you yourself would skip.

>>49396, Chud never gave a proper explanation for his racial beliefs, which could be something that reappears in the future perhaps? Related is exploring why Averi holds her racial beliefs or is edgy (the xwitter lore doesn't quite fit here).

>>58833, With Robin living in a relatively wealthy home, I wonder if money will be like nothing to her when they go shopping. Or, will she make Chud pay for all of his own stuff?
Also, I felt the previous format with text color made it easier to follow dialogue, but if you prefer a more formal "publisher" style, then that's fine.

"Death stare" gets repeated a lot. Variety would be nice.
Vices like alcohol make an appearance, which makes me wonder which other drugs will appear. Maybe Black-chan with weed?
As the story progresses, it does seem to focus less on the school setting. Perhaps it can reappear in the form of them joining clubs, campaigning for student government, playing sports, attending stadium events, graduating, going to college (?) or even a possible high school reunion decades after graduation.
Perhaps looking at how the characters manage to (or don't) move out of their homes.
Or, if you want to avoid a slice-of-life romance, perhaps explore Chud's attempt at politics in wider society, realistic or otherwise, and all the ways his Opposition tries to take him down.
Another reminder that they are anthro characters, and to explore the interactions between humans and anthros and how they live (slightly) different lives in society.

The characters:
Averi is far more provocative than expected. While she does not have an "official" personality, I always imagined her as more passive and cute rather than dominant, but at this point in the story, her personality can not really be changed. Her going crazy for Chud's heart presumably for no reason other than his beliefs makes me wonder, is she a lonely femcel? Her going after him because they live similar lives maybe? Averi's personal life is perhaps worth exploring to explain why she's the way she is.

Robin is understandably the dominant gamer type although seemingly softens up to Chud through the chapters. Main question is, how much freedom will her father permit to her, and how much does her mother care (who has been relatively unmentioned)? >>44020, her living in a 2 story house makes me wonder if a wealthy vs, poor power dynamic will appear in the story, assuming Chud and Averi lean towards the poor side.

Conflict and resolution is a good method for starting and ending chapters, and Chad is one such decent way for introducing conflict, although don't make him evil. Instead, make him someone whose success and unbothered demeanor provokes jealousy in Chud.

The supporting characters, specifically Black-chan and Nekotsuki, will probably be fine without heavy character development. Black-chan is perhaps best used for softening up Chud's beliefs (or making him more extreme), whilst Nekotsuki is more difficult to introduce and perhaps restricted to anti-vice or anti-glutton purposes.

Chud is best written when he is relatable whilst not being a self-insert. Chud being a flawed antihero is what makes him interesting, more because it reduces predictability in whether or not he will screw up his social interactions. This is mainly something to keep in mind and ensure that his flaws do not disappear completely, unless he somehow undergoes some extreme event that changes him entirely as a person.
Some questions worth considering: how does he reconcile his racial beliefs vs. love for fox women? How does he reconcile his political beliefs whilst Chad (who fits his description of the superior man) undermines him (without turning into an anti-White story)?
I figure this story fits the Bildungsroman category, although if Chud changes too much, then he is, well, no longer the "Chud" archetype as the internet knows him.

There is no wrong answer in how you choose to develop the story, and really, anything goes as long as you enjoy what you are making. Don't worry too much about what I think, but rather focus on what you want to see written, or maybe even drawn
Again, these are just the thoughts I've had while reading this story, and the questions are more to guide your thoughts rather than to get an immediate answer. I genuinely like this story. Whenever I have more free time in life, I will try to give back in some way.

>>58986
Thanks for the feedback! I agree with everything you wrote. I think the main issue is that I don't really plan anything out; I just write in the few hours I have before I go to work, which doesn't leave a lot of time to edit and proofread.
I also feel the need to rush through scenes since I try to keep each chapter contained in one post, which is around 1600 words or so, with the character limit. I want each chapter to include something meaningful to advance Chud's relationship with Averi or Robin. Character limit in mind, I avoided doing much, if any, worldbuilding, which I admit was a mistake. I'll try writing longer chapters and have them be split up into two posts so I can flesh out more shit.
And yes, I do think the old format was slightly better. It sucks there's no way to preview what your post looks like with all the tags applied and everything. I think I'll try a hybrid of both for the next chapter. 

>Dreams are great for exploring a character's beliefs and desires without necessarily being bound to the rules of realism. Perhaps more of these could appear in the story.
Yeah, I featured a lot more dreams in the proto version of this fic in a previous thread. I've avoided doing them this time because of the arbitrary constraint I put on myself to keep everything contained in one post.

>Death stare" gets repeated a lot. Variety would be nice.
LMAO yeah I've noticed that too. I think that'll be solved if I don't rush each chapter and I actually have a chance to read what I just wrote.

>As the story progresses, it does seem to focus less on the school setting. Perhaps it can reappear in the form of them joining clubs, campaigning for student government, playing sports, attending stadium events, graduating, going to college (?) or even a possible high school reunion decades after graduation.
As for the focus away from a school setting, that's more because I didn't have the time or space to flesh them out; this should improve in newer chapters. I'm gonna keep this story contained to Chud's Senior year. As for a sequel, I kinda sorta have an idea of what I wanna do for that...

>Another reminder that they are anthro characters, and to explore the interactions between humans and anthros and how they live (slightly) different lives in society.
I'm a nufur when it comes to anthros to be completely honest. I discovered Averi last year, and only recently have I bothered to look beyond her.

>Averi is far more provocative than expected.
Yeah, I think I made her too horny lol. Uh, I guess my cope is that she's only like this during her teenage years, but she becomes more passive in her late 20s (aka when she becomes "canon" Averi). Her personality does serve a purpose, though, since her provocations help get the ball rolling for Chud, since he would have never had the will to interact with her and Robin otherwise.

>Conflict and resolution is a good method for starting and ending chapters, and Chad is one such decent way for introducing conflict, although don't make him evil. Instead, make him someone whose success and unbothered demeanor provokes jealousy in Chud
Bro... I really wish it were possible for me to redo an earlier chapter because I'll admit, making him "evil" wasn't really my intention; it was another consequence of me rushing a chapter and trying to find a way to end it on a cliffhanger for some reason. I wanted to do the whole "Chud looks up to Chad" but I kinda already cemented that he's an asshole...

>Again, these are just the thoughts I've had while reading this story, and the questions are more to guide your thoughts rather than to get an immediate answer.
Whoops! Again, thanks for the feedback! :3

Which one of you posted this on that other website earlier today?

>>59171
Are you trying to start something?

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>>58833
I just read this
Its a clear shiny gem

When are we getting a new chapter

>>60507
In 1488 minutes
I get out earlier now that I have a new schedule but I’m gonna be busy after work today, so maybe tomorrow

>>60524
da jooos made me pick someone up from the airport so now i have no time...
its over

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>>60883
its okay saar we will wait fur yuo to produce a heartwarming gem

>>>60524
>da jooos made me pick someone up from the airport so now i have no time...
>its over

Yuo must get back to work

everytime someone bumps this thread I get excited thinking it's a new chapter 

I will continue to patiently wait tho

>>64331
>>64335
why did u do this...

>>64336
I'm gonna keep reminding yuo this is literally kino son

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>>58833
>Sorry fur taking such a long break. I procrastinated fur way too long o algo. This section is a bit short since I intended to split the full chapter into two posts. The second part is done, but I need to polish it a bit. I'll post it later today when I get home from work.

Averi couldn’t fall asleep; her mind was racing even though she’d been lying down fur hours. 
Normally, the red vixen would spend her weekends staying up late into the night playing video games, browsing imageboards, and drawing… questionable things on her tablet. However, she found herself unable to concentrate on doing anything but contemplate the “intel” she collected from snooping on Chud and Robin.

“They aren’t actually going on a date— are they?” She murmured as she tossed and turned in her bed sheets.
“This is such a cucked strategy, Averi… what if Robin starts to actually like him…?”

Her “master plan” to win over Chud paradoxically required him to get with Robin first. Averi knew she should’ve been glad that her plan was going through. After all, the impossible had been done; Robin somehow convinced herself that Chud was worth a shot! This is what Averi wanted, right? Something felt off to her, though.

“She’s gonna try to… fix him?”  Her eyes widened.
That wasn’t a part of the plan!
“Chuddie is perfect the way he is~! Okay, maybe he needs to tone down some of the incel shit, but still…”

 What if Robin succeeded? What if she turned Chud into a normie? He’s so clueless that he’ll let Robin groom him into her version of a perfect boyfriend! Chud would switch from hating Averi fur being Latinx to hating her fur being a worthless stinky femcel fox, and she would grow old and alone, and they would NEVER have 12 unvaccinated kids while living in a cabin in the woods and-
“N…no….Chuddie-” 
She covered her eyes with her paws and tried to fight back a whimper.
“I-I’m… such a stupid fluffing cuck…”

In a sudden fit of rage, she stuffed her face in her pillow and screamed. 
WHAT THE FLUFF IS WRONG WITH ME?!?! WHY THE FLUFF COULDN’T I JUST BE A NORMAL GIRL AND JUST “ACCIDENTALLY” KISS HIM OR SOMETHING TO GET HIM TO FALL FUR ME??? (that’s not what normal girls do, doe) NOW THAT FLUFFING POOCH-
Averi bit into her pillow and tore it to shreds with her sharp fox teeth. Feathers flew everywhere as she fantasized about Robin’s guts spilling all over her.
SHE’S SO FLUFFING NAÏVE… I COULD KILL HER IF I GOT THE CHANCE!!! YES!!! JUST LIKE THIS!!! CHUD WILLL BE MINE NO MATTER WHAT!!!

Averi’s poor pillow lay in tatters all over her bed. She was trying to calm down from her crashout when the sudden sound of knocking at her door startled her.
“Avie, señorita… is everything okay?”
“Yes, Papi, I’m okay… I was— making arts and crafts~! Yes! Sorry, I’ll try to be quieter…”

She heard her father sigh as he walked away from her door. Luckily, she always kept it locked. She got up, turned off her room light, and climbed back into bed.
Averi didn’t really know how to feel about her dad, or her mom, or anyone in her family, fur that matter. She spent most of her time alone, and her family just let her be. Besides, her parents were away from home on most days, working overtime and out of the town to make ends meet. But weren’t Hispanic families supposed to be close-knit? Especially since they were a family of foxes in a human-dominated world. Maybe they should all take a trip back to the Island? Averi shook her head. There’s a reason why they left in the first place…

Averi frowned as she held the feathers of her pillow’s corpse in her paws. Now she had nothing to rest her head on. If only Chud were there to hold her as she fell asleep…
“Chuddie~…”
Averi began to fantasize about the life she desperately wanted with Chud. They would do all the things couples do, like watch movies, eat chicken, play vidya games, eat chicken…
“After we graduate… we could go on a camping trip to the countryside to gain experience living off the grid~! I already know Chuddie knows next to nothing about nature, maybe I could teach him a thing or two~? Geeze, shouldn’t MEN already know about that stuff~?”
Averi gekkered a little. She knew Chud was an all-around pathetic dork. She couldn’t understand what “potential” Robin could possibly see in him. 

“…She’s just leading him on to get money or attention or something... I bet they’ll break up befure Christmas… Just imagine how devastated Chuddie would be that day~!” Averi gekkered.
“Don’t worry, Chuddie, I’ll be there to comfurt you… then you’ll realize we were made fur each other all along~!”
“Oh Robbie, only I can handle Chuddie at the end of the day~… GEEEKKKK!!!”

Averi squealed as she flipped down on her bed and stuffed her face into the remains of her pillow, tail wagging crazily behind her. She could feel her cheeks burning as bright as the ripe tomatoes she used to pick on her grandfather’s plantation back on the Island.
“Hmmmm~!” she hummed into the mess of torn cloth and feathers.
“Heh~… I bet stupid Chuddie is doing that “No Nut November” challenge because his favorite dude bro podcaster told him it would make him a “Chad” or something…”
She sighed as she squeezed her legs. “Oh well… more fun fur me~!”

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>>72549
>bump 
>opens it
>new chapter
thank u, writeranon

>>72549
Bumo

>>72549
Oh gawd we finally got a new chapter, thank you writeranon

>>72549
Sorry Averi you’ll always be a stinky femcel fox.

>>72549
“Ayo! This be yo stop ‘n shiieet, homie.”
Chud glared at his nyagger Uber driver fur a second befure putting on a fake smile. He really wanted to loath straight in the nog’s face about how much he hated Ebonics, but he managed to control his temper.
“T-Thanks, sir…”
Chud quickly jumped out of the Dodge Charger befure the nyagger could do anything irrational. His intuition told him that the human negro was more dangerous than even the most feral of ‘coons. As his Uber sped away, Chud looked in awe at the sight befure him.

It had been years since Chud visited the Whitehaven Central Mall. He hated it whenever his mom took him shopping. At least he had his DS to keep him company on those hours-long shopping sprees. Once he was old enough to stay home, he rarely saw the inside of any stores. Not even Gamestop could do business with him once he became a PC chad.
Why do foids care so much about clothes? It’s just a piece of clothing! I can’t believe they spend hundreds of their goy dollars on that shit...

Fur such a mediocre town, the mall was massive and well-decorated. The plaza entrance was decorated with vegetation circling a central water fountain. He could see plenty of human and anthro foids alike, sitting down looking at their phones on the benches.
Braindead pooches… why are they so obsessed with their phones? Probably busy texting Chads about how much they hate beta males fur daring to be in their line of sight or something…
Chud shook his head. God damn it! The only reason I’m here is because of Robin! I shouldn’t be thinking about other girls anyway! Fluff my stupid chudcel brain!

He walked past the foids and pushed the heavy glass doors open. Chud’s ears were immediately engulfed by the sound of hundreds of shoppers echoing throughout the building. His mouth watered at the scent of cinnamon rolls from the food court that surrounded the main path connecting the entrance to the main atrium. It was packed like a highway during rush hour with what must’ve been hundreds of people streaming in and out of stores and between the lines of kiosks.

Chud walked down the atrium as he pulled out his phone and checked his messages. Robin said to meet up at a clothes store near the back of the mall.
Fluff! I should’ve told that nyagger to drop me off at the back entrance instead!
Chud growled and texted Robin.
“I’m here, but I’m at the front. I’ll walk back there in a few.”
The message wasn’t sent; he had no service in that area.

FLUFFING JEWS AND THEIR STUPID 5G TOWERS THAT DON’T EVEN WORK HALF OF THE TIME!!!
Chud was so busy raging in his head that he ran face-first into a black and white mass of fluff, knocking the glasses off his face.
Panic surged through him since he knew it was seconds away from being crunched by some passing shopper. He completely ignored his victim, now lying dazed face down on the floor, as he frantically searched fur his glasses.

“Ah ha!” Chud put on his pair and immediately blushed when his vision cleared. He was staring straight at a fluffy pair of black buttocks. It was covered in a mesmerizing pattern of white spots. Unfurtunately fur Chud, the foid’s (he hoped it was a foid) tail blocked his view of anything else. He got up, still staring at the foid’s gyatt. Chud recognized that she was a skunk. He heard her grunt as she got up and turned around to face him. He didn’t have to be a rocket scientist to tell that she wasn’t very happy with him.

“S-stupid Moid! Watch where you’re going! Urrrhhh!!!” The skunk said angrily, clenching her fists. Chud thought she was pretty cute, even though she looked like she was about to kill him.
“S-sorry! I didn’t see- “
“You think that I’m gonna spray, don’t you?”
“No- “
“It's just a stereotype! Why are you mephitophobes always like this? Wait… were you staring at my-?”
“If you let me explain first, you dumb foi-“
“GAHHHH!!! FLUFFING INCEL MOID FLUFF OFF!!! RUBY, WHERE DID YOU GO???” She stormed off into the crowd, ignoring the heckling of startled shoppers.

What the fluff was her problem? “Moid”? No way, is she a… femcel? No… /r9k/ told me that was impossible, no foid could ever truly be celibate…
What Chud did know, however, was that she had a pretty nice ass. Too bad she was black, and a skunk too. He saved that memory to his biological hard drive fur future use once November ended.
Chud’s phone dinged. It was Robin.

“No worries :) I’m already picking out some stuff fur you to wear.”
Chud’s heart fluttered. Why was he even entertaining the thought of other women? He practically had one already. This was literally the perfect opportunity to turn their friendship into something more. What if she wanted to try on a bikini? Chud’s mind raced with naughty thoughts as he continued his way towards the back of the mall. He failed to notice a certain sly Latinx fox trailing from behind.

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>>72765
jade my beloved

>>72765
Oh that's cool that foo ocs are involved now, I might actually take a read now

>>72776
fell fur the bait award
now bro has no choice but to read 30k+ words of slop fur a cameo

>>72765
Love it
I think you were very creative with how you introduced Jade in the story, even if she was a one off character this was really funny gek

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>>72765
Kinda weird seeing my own OCs in this, lol... I'm flattered, thank you fur the silly cameo! :D 

I'm very glad you're continuing this, I've been reading every new part the day it comes out

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>>72765
Bumo

>>72765
Good shit pvtriqt
bumo